Talk:Western University of Health Sciences/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 01:49, 31 March 2014 (UTC)

I did a skim read of this article, and while parts of the article are fine (namely the referencing), other parts make this a quick-fail candidate.:
 * The campus section is just noting recent developments rather than actually talking about the campus as a whole, and needs a complete restructuring.
 * Remove the mission section. The accreditation section also seems unnecessary.
 * For that matter, there's several parts missing from this article that a University article would need to be a GA. Namely, there's nothing about the academics at all. Read through a few of the articles at Category:GA-Class Universities articles to get an idea of what to add in the article.

Once the article is restructured, it may then be near nominating for GA status. Wizardman 01:49, 31 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the feedback. At this time, I have made several of the changes that you suggested.  I will need to work on the campus section at a later time.  When it is ready, I will nominate the article again.  I appreciate your help.  Rytyho usa (talk) 23:12, 9 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I have worked on the campus section, completely restructuring it, and adding more on the campus as a whole, etc. I have also made several other improvements to the article.  Please let me know if you have any further feedback!  Thank you.  Rytyho usa (talk) 01:07, 30 April 2014 (UTC)