Talk:Western world/Archive 8

Western world, Western culture, Western civilization
This page seems to have a fair amount of overlap with Western culture and History of Western civilization. Western civilization currently redirects to Western culture, but it's unclear to me how the scope of this article differs from Western culture. I get the sense that authors tend to use the terms pretty much interchangeably, and some of the citations on this page refer to Western civilization rather than the Western world. In my opinion, we should do one of the following: I'm leaning toward the second, and I could help with the trimming, but let me know if you have different thoughts. &mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 18:09, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Merge the most relevant parts of this page into Western culture and History of Western civilization. Delete this page and make Western world redirect to one of those two.
 * 2) Delimit the scope of this article more clearly. I think that it would make sense to keep this article focused on the historical formation of the Western identity and the "othering" of Orientalism. This would mean trimming a lot of the content that seems like a general history of Western civilization and keeping only the content about Western —that is, the history of people viewing themselves as Western, and how Westerners have intentionally distinguished themselves from "the Orient".

Article has been improved accordingly, you may undo the WP:NPOV tag now. Rim sim (talk) 15:12, 24 January 2023 (UTC)


 * That tag was about the POV issue mentioned in . My proposal in this section has not been addressed. Do you have any thoughts about my proposed trimming?     &mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 15:18, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

What are the points that need to be trimmed? Rim sim (talk) 15:29, 24 January 2023 (UTC)


 * The content that's not directly related to Western identity, for example:
 * Most of . This is not describing the Western cultural identity, it's just describing culture identified as Western.
 * A lot of, especially before the idea of "the West" began to emerge. Some of this section is about the historical distinctions between East and West, but a lot of it is just a history of Western civilization.
 * A lot of the lead. It's way too many paragraphs.
 * I think that this article should stay focused on the ways that Westerners have distinguished themselves from "the Orient". More general content belongs in Western culture and History of Western civilization.     &mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 17:59, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Greece
Greece isn't in dark blue in the map? Greece which contributed the most on the current Western Civilization Nlivataye (talk) 17:51, 14 March 2023 (UTC)


 * There is no one universally agreed-upon definition. &emsp;&mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 16:28, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
 * There is no one universally agreed-upon definition. &emsp;&mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 16:28, 24 March 2023 (UTC)

Problematic recent edits
Rim sim recently added several sentences into the lead that come across to me (and another editor) as heavily problematic. The majority of which:


 * Only relates to certain parts of what is considered to be Western civilization.
 * Is completely off-topic/debatable/not mentioned elsewhere in the article.



This sentence is problematic in of itself. What is this claim supposed to connotate or denote? Many metrics of ethnic, cultural, and social diversity predominately rank the Western World among the lower range of mean/median values. For example, the chart to the right.

When? This certainly hasn't been a unifying idea throughout the course of Western history. Additionally: The boundaries of who is "white" or not has also frequently shifted. (Hitler and the Slavic peoples; Lebensraum.) This isn't to downplay things like the White Australia policy, African enslavement or indigenous displacement, et al. But this is a particular conception of the West that was only prominent in certain areas of the Western World between 1600/1700-1960s.

It's true that ethnic/racial issues in the United States are predominately focused on race (although ethnic divisions between Germans, Southern Italians, and Irish also happened). But in many European countries... ethnicity/religion played an equivalent to far bigger role than the dominance of a "pan-European racial/ethnic group".

There's multiple problems with this sentence:


 * It seemingly implies that these ideals (as it's the first mention of the subjects "individualism", "colonialism", and "Enlightenment" in the article) arouse out of colonialism.
 * This is incorrect. Individualism was already predominant in Catholic (and later, particularly Protestant) areas before.

I'm not sure why we're including criticism of feminism... without any other context. There were non-Western feminists as well. This belongs either in the body or deleted altogether.

Certain people saw it this way. Others didn't. Seems undue. KlayCax (talk) 23:47, 24 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Tagging involved editors:  . KlayCax (talk) 23:51, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
 * This whole article needs a major rewrite in my opinion. &emsp;&mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 01:42, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
 * All the sentences have their sourced references and are included in the lead as per WP:LEAD. Not personal opinions; Just because they seem controversial doesn't mean you have to remove them. Rewrite for more
 * WP:NPOVHOW Rim sim (talk) 07:59, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
 * WP:NPOVHOW Rim sim (talk) 07:59, 25 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Even the revised wording has significant problems. . That's why the sentences were removed entirely, not just revised. KlayCax (talk) 18:58, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
 * I agree. The entire last paragraph is full of WP:FRINGE views given WP:UNDUE weight. Khirurg (talk) 19:38, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Yep. None of this is salvagable. This is going to have be reverted and taken to RFC. At best, the current wording only applies to certain parts of the West in certain parts of history. Poland is one of the most ethnically homogeneous countries in the world. While religiosity in the Western World - similar to the Eastern World - varies drastically. (Japan v. Thailand, Poland v. Denmark, et al.) The wording was already bad (and often inaccurate) before Rim sim's edits. The new wording makes it even worse. Bringing up feminism/human rights for women, individualism, liberalism, et al. and connecting it immediately to "colonialism" is... uh, problematic, to say the least. WP: NPOVHOW and WP: Preserve doesn't apply here. KlayCax (talk) 21:27, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Text has been improved as per all the contested points. Women's rights and religious freedom (irreligious affiliation) that are taken for granted in the west are alien in much of the world. Women in Afghanistan are banned from entering school after 6th grade, and there's no need to talk about religious freedom there or in much of the middle East, south asia, sub Saharan Africa etc. Placed the points about women's rights and irreligious affiliation as an example for the progressive nature of human development in the west. Removed the point regarding colonialism and individualism, enlightenment which is not clear in the reference. Text of the points regarding colonization and diversity have been improved. Hope the NPOV tag is removed soon. Rim sim (talk) 08:58, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
 * This article is about the Western world. All of this stuff belongs on Western culture/history.
 * A lot of this stuff is still generalizable to only certain parts of the Western world + factually problematic to say the least. KlayCax (talk) 23:03, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Sources referenced in the article have the term "Western world" mentioned in them; generalizing text has been improved for better clarity. Also don't think anything is factually problematic here, people with an Anti-Western sentiment will anyway find everything about the West as a problem. Rim sim (talk) 08:49, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
 * "Racism was cited to have been a contributing factor in the westerners' colonization of the new world, which today constitutes much of the geographical West."
 * Was cited or is cited? The current text implies that racism is not cited as a contributing factor of colonization anymore. Almost as if racism doesn't exist today. Not to mention that the term "new world" originates from a colonialist perspective.
 * Also, maybe the summary should include a critique of the term "Western world" instead of a critique of feminism. This is just strange.
 * Just wanted to point some things out, I also think there are many problematic parts here. This is not Anti-Western sentiment, this is realizing that Pro-Western sentiment is the prevailing norm. 145.254.142.124 (talk) 11:27, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

Micro-states
Would the micro-states of Andorra, Monaco, Liechtenstein, San Marino, and Vatican City not be included under the modern definition of "The Western World"? They're not listed, and even though they are small and easy to forget, I feel they would be included. EnglishPackets (talk) 04:16, 6 May 2023 (UTC)


 * Where in the article would you like to include these microstates? Do you have reliable sources supporting a specific change to the article? &emsp;&mdash;&hairsp; Freoh 11:33, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
 * I would have included them under the section "Modern definitions" where the wikipedia page says the US, Canada, EU, UK, Norway, Iceland, Switzerland, Australia and New Zealand are the West. I guess the website they pulled that definition from doesn't include the microstates, likely since they're so small, so I guess we can't really add them to the page. Though I feel it's common sense that those five countries are western. EnglishPackets (talk) 01:52, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Correct Misinformation
All of America is part of the western world. This is extremely inaccurate to believe the western hemisphere, recreated by European countries isn't the west Guyanastar (talk) 02:40, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Why is Latin America in Cyan?
The map doesn't reflect the cultural and political reality of Latin America, which is as Western (or more!) as, say, Romania or Poland. Nor it reflects the text of the article. poldavo (talk) 22:22, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Consensus blue map


Admitting there's agreement on the blue map equating Eastern Europe to Latin America, the author could have never: to understand south America and orthodox Europe any matching is plain christian culture that is, an unreferenced unpublished saying. it's not encyclopedic. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.1.132.188 (talk) 15:55, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

Point noted Rim sim (talk) 10:09, 12 November 2022 (UTC)


 * I agree that for this reason, Latin America should have a different color, as the author of Clash of Civilizations does. A new sock of The basis of recently raised concerns that the color assigned to the "core" Western civilization are too similar to the United Nations colors, which are probably baseless but worth considering as well. –LaundryPizza03 ( d c̄ ) 14:01, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Also of note is that Kazakhstan is not colored cyan on this map, but the CoC map groups it with the Orthodox countries. –LaundryPizza03 ( d c̄ ) 14:04, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
 * And since the image is not SVG, I will need to create and upload a new file. –LaundryPizza<b style="color:#b00">03</b> ( d c̄ ) 14:20, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Western world (Clash of Civilizations).svg
 * I have uploaded a new version of the map with distinctly colored "civilizations" and which is more faithful to the source. Some countries in CoC are divided between civilizations, but these are not indicated due to technical reasons. I would recommend using stripes, if possible, for French Guiana and the Philippines. –<b style="color:#77b">Laundry</b><b style="color:#fb0">Pizza</b><b style="color:#b00">03</b> ( d c̄ ) 05:41, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
 * @LaundryPizza03 Huntington is a laughing stock in academia. His ideas are presented in grad school as an example of attractive but unfounded theories. He cherrypicks evidence. He is only famous because neocon used his arguments in early 2000s geopolitics and because there is so much scholarship citing his work but to criticize it.
 * Latin America is 100% Western. Those denying it show little direct knowledge of the region. I have lived in 2 and worked in 17 countries there and can attest to it. Otherwise remove Portugal, Spain and Italy from your idea of the West, please, as there are not very substantive differences with modern Latin America. poldavo (talk) 22:26, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I agree, the article and map reference Huntington's work, but upon closer inspection of his source, it becomes evident that Huntington merely uses the term 'either a part of the West or distinct civilizations intimately related to the West' in the context of Latin America. There is no substantial discussion regarding a close relationship between the Orthodox and the West aside from Quigley's civilizational flowchart describing the Islamic, Western and Orthodox worlds as originating from Classical Antiquity and Canaanite (Abrahamic) civilization. He does mention Orthodoxy has been both becoming westernized, losing territory to the West ever since the 19th century, and under the brink of complete westernization if Russia ever falls as a world power.
 * The inclusion of the Orthodox World in the map appears to be unsupported by Huntington's actual writings and may reflect bias from the image maker. We should either accurately represent Huntington's work if it's our chosen reference or seek an alternative source connecting Latin America, the Anglosphere, Europe, and the Orthodox World.
 * Regarding the colors, Huntington originally used grayscale on the map: solid black for the West, horizontal black stripes for Latin America, and medium light gray for the Orthodox world. 181.176.8.230 (talk) 13:35, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 23 October 2023
I would suggest changing "Modern-day Western world essentially encompasses the nations and states where civilization or culture is considered Western[9][10][11]—the roots of which some historians have traced back to the Greco-Roman world.[12][13]" to "The modern-day Western world essentially encompasses the nations and states where civilization or culture is considered Western[9][10][11]—the roots of which the majority of historians have traced back to the Greco-Roman world and Christianity.[12][13]" This is uncontroversial as it contains no value judgements, and is to maintain consistency with the cited sources as well as the linked article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Western_culture), i.e. "Western culture originates from the mixing of Greco-Roman culture, Christian culture and Germanic culture.[2]" Thank you for reviewing my request. 2603:7000:9900:3000:ED9E:710F:A3FF:7D7E (talk) 09:26, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ -Lemonaka‎  12:07, 23 October 2023 (UTC)