Talk:What Is Life/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Paul MacDermott (talk · contribs) 21:22, 17 November 2012 (UTC)

Reviewer: Paul MacDermott (talk · contribs) 19:34, 17 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Review by Paul MacDermott


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * Article is fairly well laid out and written. Use of lyrics is ok per WP:LYRICS as they are used in the context of discussion. One small suggestion I have is that when they appear together references should be in numerical order. I've spotted a couple which I'll correct, but you might want to check for others.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * Very well-referenced with inline citations. There's no source for the Discoteques version in "Cover Versions" so you'll want to add one.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * The topic is broadly covered with relevant detail where necessary.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * The article is neutral and has no issues regarding bias.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No disputes concerning content or edit wars.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * Images look fine. Consider adding an audio sample as this always helps to illustrate the song to anyone who is unfamiliar with it.
 * 1) Overall:
 * [[Image:Symbol wait.svg|20px]] On hold Extremely close to passing, but I think we need a reference for Discoteque. Alternatively take it out if one isn't available. Once that's done though I'll pass this as there are no other issues. Good luck. Paul MacDermott (talk) 21:22, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review, Paul MacDermott. Yes, it's unfortunate about the Discotheques cover – that text was in the article long before I ever worked on it, I think. I searched online for a reference a while back, but no joy, so I've just deleted it now, as you've suggested. Regards, JG66 (talk) 03:23, 18 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol support vote.svg Pass All problems sorted now so I've passed it. Congratulations on your good work. This is an interesting article and I believe it has FAC potential. A quick note on the Discoteques. I'm quite good at digging out obscure stuff so I'll see if I can dind something. :) Paul MacDermott (talk) 13:18, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Fantastic, thank you so much. That would be great if you could find a source for the Discotheques cover – I've pasted the deleted text into a Word file, hoping one day to find a reference and then reinstate the text ... who knows. Thanks again! JG66 (talk) 14:55, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Fantastic, thank you so much. That would be great if you could find a source for the Discotheques cover – I've pasted the deleted text into a Word file, hoping one day to find a reference and then reinstate the text ... who knows. Thanks again! JG66 (talk) 14:55, 18 November 2012 (UTC)