Talk:What U Workin' With?/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 02:54, 1 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Just wondering if there are any updates with this. Thanks. Carbrera (talk) 20:19, 16 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Whoops, so sorry I was busy last week. Here are the comments.


 * "is a song recorded by American recording artists Gwen Stefani and Justin Timberlake from the" → for the
 * "although Stefani's part had remained a secret" → with Stefani's appearance being a secret
 * "the lyrics involve having a good time" → "involve" sounds bizarre, try "discuss" or "talk about" instead
 * "many found Stefani's contributions to" → contribution
 * "digital consumption" sounds awkward
 * "During the recording process, Timberlake spoke cheerfully on the recording process" → try alter "recording process" with something else like "recording session" (repeated here)

The article will pass GA upon all issues being addressed! ;) Simon (talk) 02:01, 17 January 2017 (UTC)
 * All set! Thanks so much! Carbrera (talk) 02:03, 17 January 2017 (UTC).
 * Lol that was quick. GA passed, well done! — Simon (talk) 02:04, 17 January 2017 (UTC)