Talk:Wheaton World Wide Moving

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Just stumbled on this article while looking for a moving company. It reads like a promo and has only 1 source (a link to some award they received, no less).

This is a rather large company with tons of franchise affiliates and reviews. BBB rates them A+ so I'm sure they're a good company and all that, but this is Wikipedia, not Craigslist. This article is a promotional stub. Given the company's size, I don't believe the article should be removed, but it definitely needs to be re-written. 174.31.211.152 (talk) 05:52, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

I updated the Wheaton page and made it less like an advertisement. I'll continue to work on updating it, but could you remove this comment? Mslavens (talk) 15:20, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I took out some more unencyclopediac content. Is the bullet-list of "history" really encyclopediac either? Seems like it's a mish-mash of awards and "firsts" (all uncited!), relationships (mergers, renames) to other companies (should be written as unified prose?), and sponsorships/philanthropy (should be written as unified prose?). I think User:Mslavens's hit'n'run contributions and response to the above concern suggests a professional relationship with this company. DMacks (talk) 22:09, 14 October 2016 (UTC)