Talk:When Christmas Comes/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Eurofan88 (talk · contribs) 16:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Review
 * Critical Reception -> reception
 * Chart performance -> Commercial performance would be better since the section also mentions the numbers of sales
 * Give a link to ABC in the lead and Music video section
 * Any comments about Legend's guest appearance in the critical reception?
 * Couldn't really find much to be honest. Anything that's in the article is all I could find. — Calvin999  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * "It premiered on December 13, 2011" where? On a show? On her website? Also it's not stated when the video was uploaded to Carey's VEVO channel
 * Same as above. — Calvin999  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Why there's no reviews for the music video?
 * Same as above. — Calvin999  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Also who directed it?
 * No one knows. — Calvin999  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Rap-Up actually knows ;) --Eurofan88 (talk) 18:08, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, added. — Calvin999  18:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Also the video features a cameo by Carey's husband Nick Cannon. You should add it too. --Eurofan88 (talk) 18:23, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Added. — Calvin999  18:51, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * "The liner notes presented are for the original version included on the album."/"Credits adapted from the liner notes of Merry Christmas II You" it repeats the same thing two times, remove one of them from the section Credits and personnel
 * Wouldn't it be better if you add subsections in the Chart section? Like "Original version" and "Duet with John Legend"
 * I don't think so, it's unnecessarily creating sub-sections. This is simpler. — Calvin999  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Add category 2011 singles
 * Add the temaplate of John Legend under Carey's template in the article
 * No link to her solo version in the External links?
 * Her verified account doesn't have an audio sample. Typically only link to a music video or lyric video. — Calvin999  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Romove the "which Amy Sciarretto of PopCrush described as a demonstration of their "creative and collaborative chemistry"" part from picture in the Promotion section. It's already mentioned within the section.
 * No because it gives the image rationale and describes why the picture is included. — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>  19:19, 15 August 2015 (UTC)

I'm placing it on hold. Also i would be thankful with you if you write a review for Wallace (song) nominated by me and Azealia911. Best wishes! --Eurofan88 (talk) 16:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC) Suport! Everything looks okay now, i don't have any comments anymore as you answered them all. --Eurofan88 (talk) 19:25, 15 August 2015 (UTC) Thank you — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>  19:27, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing. I'm reluctant to review Wallace (song) because it's canvassing and I don't want an admin to slap my wrist for doing it. Asking people to review a nomination is discouraged. — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>  17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)