Talk:When I Grow Up (The Pussycat Dolls song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

2 deadlinks
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 03:26, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Reality series
 * "the goal of the show was add a seventh member to the group." missing a word
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Also this section has nothing to do with the song in any part, so its best to move it to the main page and remove it here.
 * It's in the background section for a reason. This all happened before they began recording their second album. Statυs  (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I still see no reason to keep it here, it talks about the show not the song. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ❌ Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  14:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Background information is to what put happened before the song's creation into context. Adding a new member, and then them leaving is directly relevant to one of the reasons they took so long to release a new album. Statυs  (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The section seems more suitable for the album, not the song. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  15:49, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Can you remove this section to the main article so I can pass it? Best, Jona  talk to me  15:51, 26 July 2012 (UTC)


 * I removed it 15 days ago... Statυs  (talk) 02:27, 27 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Music and lyrics
 * "Lead vocalist Nicole Scherzinger was cited as adopting" we already know she is the lead vocalist, so her last name is only needed here.
 * Delink The Yardbirds
 * ✅ both Statυs  (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Remixes
 * For unknown reasons, the remix was never released. source?
 * Why exactly does this need a source? The remix just wasn't released. Nothing was said about it since. Statυs  (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Please fix the cn tags in this section
 * How would you suggest I source that statement? Could I just source the CD single/Digital releases that are present later in the article? Statυs  (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  14:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Commercial performance
 * at number seventy-six on the issue dated June 14, 2008 per WP:ORDINAL it would be 76, please apply elsewhere in this section.
 * ✅ what I could see. Statυs  (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Please fix these before I go further. BTW sorry for the long wait. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  02:54, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * It's perfectly alright. Thank you for picking up the review!  Statυs  (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Short break, lets begin

 * Music video
 * Delink Digital Spy
 * "Kimberly's signature move:" source?
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * Delink MTV News
 * Delink 2008 MTV Movie Awards
 * Delink Los Angeles Times
 * Delink Walmart
 * ""Buttons",= and" what?
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Formats and track listings
 * Digital single source?
 * Digital EP source?
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:07, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * References
 * FN#4 "Archived from %7C the original" needs fixing
 * I don't see what is making it do that. Statυs  (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#8 publisherid?
 * The publisher ID is different on different versions of the album. By that I mean, it won't be the same on the US version as it would be on the European version. It's best to leave it out. Statυs  (talk) 00:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#12 Hachette Fillapaachi Medias is a redlink remove link
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#15 publisher?
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:15, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#16 "Up for Discussion Jump to Forums." I never heard of this author before
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#17 "MTV Networks]. " needs fixing
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#18 do not shout also its The New York Times. Check other publishers for same
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#25 publisher?
 * Doesn't appear to be one. Statυs  (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#70 " "Video: Pussycat Dolls Perform on ‘So You Think You Can Dance&#8217"." needs fixing, also please compare to FN#58
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#71 compare with FN#58
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#74 do not shout
 * ✅ Statυs  (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Please fix these issues. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for fixing, now passing. Best, Jona  talk to me  12:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)