Talk:Where Is the Feeling?/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien (talk · contribs) 15:03, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this article over the next day or two. Thebiguglyalien ( talk ) 15:03, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I've written the initial review. A few small things that need to be fixed. The only major one is that the "critical response" section needs to be rewritten, as it's currently just a collection of quotes. Thebiguglyalien  ( talk ) 18:31, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
 * this review has been open for over a week. Are you interested in bringing it to GA, or should I close the review as unsuccessful? Thebiguglyalien  ( talk ) 18:01, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi! Actually I've been a little busy, I think I'm gonna be able to fix the issues tomorrow. Is that OK? Alex reach me! 19:55, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
 * yeah, there's no rush. I just wanted to see what your plan was. Thebiguglyalien  ( talk ) 22:54, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I think all the issues have been addressed. Take a look. Alex reach me! 02:29, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
 * It looks like all of the criteria are met. I would still prefer more paraphrasing in the critical response section, but that's not enough to hold it back from GA. I'll pass the review now. Thebiguglyalien  ( talk ) 18:12, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Well-written
 * The main issue here is that the critical response section uses too many quotes. This is a common issue with music articles, and WP:RECEPTION is a helpful guide for fixing this.
 * pursued through the water by an ominous figure – This phrase is used twice, but I'm not sure if it's the best choice of wording. The citation is broken, so I can't check what it says.
 * Who or what is Within a Dream? This needs more context.
 * it was suggested that if anyone had any good ideas for covers – This does not make sense grammatically. A better wording might be "it was asked if anyone had ideas for cover songs".
 * Dave Seaman, a member of British duo Brothers in Rhythm, felt the song was a "perfect fit" for the record – It should clarify that he was a producer so the reader isn't confused.
 * Frankie Knuckles and David Morales' classic musical elements – It isn't clear what this means. Maybe say that they "drew on their previous work" or something like that.


 * Verifiable with no original research
 * The album version of "Where Is the Feeling?" received positive reviews from music critics, who described it as "soulful". – Quotes should be cited, even if they're in the lead. In this case, it should only be in the lead if this is a consensus among critics rather than just a quote from one critic.
 * The sources seem to indicate that Brothers in Rhythm were only involved in the single version, but the article doesn't make that distinction.
 * They actually produced both versions Alex reach me! 02:29, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * What makes AdrianDenning.co.uk a reliable source?
 * Removed Alex reach me! 02:29, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Goodall & Stanley-Clarke 2012 is not associated with a source.

Spotchecks:
 * [1] Harrison (2015) – Good, but make sure the words in the article aren't too similar to the source.
 * [4] Harrison (2014) – This source doesn't support some of the things in its first use. A minor issue if it's covered by the other citations there, but it's worth noting. Other use is good.
 * [8] Martin (2020) – This doesn't seem to be relevant in its first use. The other two uses are good.
 * [9] Jones (1995) – The article steals the wording of "heavy use of orchestra" from the source, which creates a plagiarism issue. Otherwise good.
 * [15] Adams (2018) – Good.

Covers production, release, composition, and reception.
 * Broad in its coverage

Does not give undue weight to any opinion or critic.
 * Neutral

No recent content disputes in the edit history or the talk page.
 * Stable

The album cover has a valid non-free use rationale.
 * Illustrated