Talk:Whereas (book)

Veronica's Peer Review
This is a fine summary beginning. The apology by President Obama appears to be a key motivating force in the impetus of this collection of poems. The summary is starting to respond to the make-up of the text, which comprise two parts. I suspect the next phase would be to break up these two parts of the text with further information about why Layli Long Soldier may have wanted to divide her book in two ways. One source I would highly recommend would be an interview by Krista Tippett on her On Being podcast. Tippett ask Soldier poignant questions about the impetus of this work.

Ufuoma's Peer Review
This is a great introduction. I agree with Veronica's review that you are off to a great start. I will check back again over the weekend to continue my assessment of your article. An idea will be for you to focus on the collection of poems by dividing it into sections, before you begin to introduce secondary sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by UUcontent (talk • contribs) 22:37, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

feedback
Looks good! The image/infobox isn't coming up when I load the page. Go to the "Insert" menu on the edit bar and click on template, then search for "Infobox book." This will bring up the template - - you can add info into the fields (title, author, etc.) and then insert. To include a pic of the cover, you may have to upload an image to Wikipedia. Easy to do with the Wikipedia upload wizard here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Profhanley (talk • contribs) 20:59, 27 November 2018 (UTC)