Talk:Whittington Tump/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:32, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * Where is the alt name of "Crookbarrow Hill" mentioned/referenced in the main body?
 * Mentioned and reffed - Dumelow (talk) 05:50, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Feel free to link Worcestershire, I imagine a high portion of our readers have no idea.
 * Linked and added England also


 * Could you be a touch more specific in the lead to those of who do know where Worcs is, whereabouts in Worcs?
 * went with "central Worcestershire" - Dumelow (talk) 05:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "clayey" might be worth linking, this is such an awful word, and it may confuse.
 * Linked to clay. Flashbacks to an engineering geology course ("grey sandy well-graded sub-rounded gravel with silt" etc.) - Dumelow (talk) 06:00, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Should The Red Book of Worcester be in italics and indeed linked if notable?
 * Indeed yes. Italicised and linked, another to add to the list of articles to create! - Dumelow (talk) 06:00, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "The tump, recognisable" is there a dicdef/link/footnote for "tump"? It's certainly a word I'm unaware of.
 * There is a basic definition at Wiktionary but I think the opening paragraph at list of tumps (to which Dumelow (talk) 06:04, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "as a land mark" one word or two?
 * Went with landmark as or article is at that name - Dumelow (talk) 06:06, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "pre-historic"/ prehistoric.
 * Went with prehistoric as our article is at that name - Dumelow (talk) 06:06, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "passed in Middlesex" link.
 * Linked - Dumelow (talk) 06:07, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have on a first read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:26, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review The Rambling Man, I think I've addressed your poitns above - Dumelow (talk) 06:07, 4 September 2021 (UTC)