Talk:Who Am I (Casting Crowns song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:43, 20 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Info box
 * Genres should be alphabetical
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * released on February 22, 2004 as → Need a comma after 2004
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Just use self-titled instead of eponymous
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * from their debut album. → on the album.
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and recording
 * The stray solo sentence should just be part of the paragraph
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * kids → children, more formal.
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Rename this Background and composition and have the composition section as a second paragraph in this section.
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Have this all as one section with no sub-sectioning. Try avoid really small, short sections. It's okay to merge some things together. Otherwise it just looks sparse.
 * Reception
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Live performances and other uses
 * Try and have two even paragraphs, the first one is massive and the second one is only two lines.
 * I've made it have three - two roughly equal ones discussing concerts, and the final discussing other uses. Does that work?  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah it works actually. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:28, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't really have this second audio file.
 * Removed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Charts
 * No need to write "Weekly" above the table
 * Removed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Certifications
 * Should have it's own section, and try formatting it like this:
 * Good suggestion - I did not know there was a certification table, but it looks much better. Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * :-) —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:28, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Again,a fairly short article so not much to review or fix. On hold. — AARON  &bull; TALK   15:59, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * All issues should be addressed now.  Toa   Nidhiki05  18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. Well done. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:28, 24 June 2013 (UTC)