Talk:Whole language

POV
Also took out the following phrase "Despite the attempts to find some common ground here, some critics have...etc". The very fact of whether balanced literacy advocates are trying to find common ground in earnest is the very topic of contention regarding "Balanced Literacy," and Moats, for one, portrays it as little more than smoke and mirrors to continue promoting Whole Language policies. The "despite" clause used the narrtive "encyclopedic" voice to deliver a specific side of the argument. I've put it on more of a "He said; She said" level. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.197.236.146 (talk) 04:13, 1 February 2010 (UTC)

Took out various adjectives describing Phonics as "decontextualized" etc. Frankly, no advocate of Phonics endorses "decontextualization"; this is a straw-man that Whole-Language proponents use. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.197.236.146 (talk) 18:37, 31 January 2010 (UTC)

"that it serves chiefly to provide employment for special ed teachers."

That's really treading on POV. That's an insult, not a fact asserted by the critics. It's true that the insult is properly attributed to the critics, but it's still not really a fact they believe so much as a slur on the educational system.

Might be possible to NPOV this by ending the sentence before this thought and saying something like, "They further assert that whole language is the primary reason so many remedial reading teachers and programs are necessary."

Jdavidb 18:47, 5 Mar 2004 (UTC)


 * --Which is the truth. Most children receiving special education services shouldn't even be getting them in the first place if the curriculum wasn't so fouled up.  High school-style language arts instruction, which "whole language" really is at bottom, is inappropriate in the early school years.  Children need to know how to decode in order to get "meaning" from what they read.  "Whole language" merely prompted an "accountability" backlash which has resulted in the monstrous No Child Left Behind.


 * Thanks, Ken Goodman, for nothing.-sn, a special ed teacher 1/14/07 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.53.202.49 (talk • contribs)

article needs work
Speaking as a language teacher, this page seems very biased toward a part-to-whole, discrete approach like phonics vs a whole-to-part, immersive approach like Whole Language. This would be analogous to a chef throwing out all cookbooks requiring more than 20 ingredients per recipe and two hours of prep time in favour of simple, quick dishes. I can't help wondering if the main author(s) of this article might be politically motivated, as a phonics-based approach has tended to be the baby of the right wing. Since the late 1980s, language teachers have adopted an eclectic approach to language teaching, with elements from a wide range of approaches and methodologies; phonics is but one cookbook in my stack of effective cookbooks. Food for thought.

This page needs significant work. Having been taught by phonics myself I have no understanding of what this alternative is, and why people advocate it, so I can't help directly. However, as a start I can at least point out why the bullet-points on this page don't tell me anything


 * literate classroom environment

What's a "literate environment"? Three things come to mind: a) the teachers are literate, which should a prerequisite for any literacy program, b) the pupils are literate, which means that you don't need a literacy program at all, or c) the walls are talking to you.


 * reading to and with students

Surely you can't teach literacy without reading, so this should be a characteristic of any literacy program. It's certainly a characteristic of phonics.


 * individualized instruction

This is just a resourcing issue, not a different style of teaching.


 * independent reading

Again, surely you can't teach literacy without reading. I'd expect all programs to have this.


 * students as authors

And you can't teach literacy without writing. Nothing special.

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This article is biased and NOT VERIFIABLE. Please revise.


 * integrating literacy skills into curriculum across disciplines

What, like reading textbooks and writing things on a board? Were there schools that just talked phonics in an isolated setting and then threw away the blackboard and didn't use any textbooks? Or is there something more to this?


 * increased parent involvement

This, again, is a resourcing issue, not really a style of teaching. Ideally you'd get parents to help out with teaching all parts of the curriculum.

I'm not attacking Whole Language, I think the problem is that the article doesn't explain what Whole Language is.

Ben Arnold 7 July 2005 23:05 (UTC)

This article is written at too advanced a level to be helpful to people seeking an introduction to the topic. It assumes a background in related topics that many people are not likely to have. Terms need to be explained, rather than used assuming that the reader understands them. Rainexpert (talk) 21:14, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

removed
"Arguing against the pictographic point of view aforementioned, some employ the following simile: teaching a phonetic language using Whole Language is like teaching people to read Chinese without teaching them how to write the letters. This would, they hold, hamper one's ability to remember and distinguish between letters."


 * Aside from the awkward sentence structures, this implies that the Chinese written language has letters - obviously it does not. While it does have pronunciation systems to aid in its teaching that either have letters (pinyin) or something similar (zhuyin), I find that this para doesn't seem to add much to the article, and I'd rather take it out than make the corrective edits.  Perhaps someone else wants to put this back in cleaner and correct form?  --Ur Wurst Enema 06:00, 11 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Perhaps I should also add that while I'm no linguist I do agree with the general idea of the removed para. It would be pretty hard to be literate in Chinese without learning either pinyin or zhuyin.  --Ur Wurst Enema 06:04, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Article needs work reply
I believe this is what the author meant in the bullets:

Literate classroom environment = Print-rich environment as in having lots of print such as stories written by students, labels, poems, diagrams, etc... on the walls of the classroom where students can view them.

Reading to and with students = reading to/with students using authentic literature rather than using textbooks which are usually written to teach specific skills and lack the vocabulary, style, subject matter, variety of form and complexity that mainstream and prize-winning children's books have.

individualized instruction = could mean differentiated instruction where the teacher works with small groups of students to develop skills they need to develop that other students may have already developed. This would be different than in a class where the teacher teaches and paces the skills equally for the entire class and ignores the fact that the students are different levels of proficiency.

independent reading = independent reading of reading level appropriate, authentic literature.

students as authors = students writing using the writing process and acting as professional authors do by choosing their own topics, revising their work and publishing (making books out of) their material. The traditional writing instruction would be focused on teacher-given writing assignments with the focus on spelling and convention.

integrating literacy skills = using reading, writing, listening and speaking as a means to learning information about other subjects such as math, science and social studies. Not just reading textbooks and writing things on the board but using literacy skills to read articles, stories, non-fiction books, internet sources, letters from professionals in that field etc...

Anyway, like I said, I think that's what the author may have meant but I could be wrong.

National Geographic Channel randomised intermediate letters
National Geographic Channel has an item that demonstrates that so long as the first and last letters of a word are correct, the letters in between can be randomised without affecting the meaning.

Nioatanl Gorghpeaic Cnenahl has an ietm that datsntoarems taht so lnog as the frsit and lsat lteerts of a wrod are cerorct, the lteters in beweten can be romdanised wuhtiot atecffnig the minneag.

This claim is superficially true, but what you cannot be sure of is whether two or more words share the same random pattern. Should pairs of words share the same pattern, sometimes this might lead to loss of meaning, while other times this might lead to a completely wrong and dangerous meaning. It may also be true that the longer words are the harder they are to decode, in which case the reader may get stuck. Since Microsoft Word doesn't have a word-randomising function, the randomisation has to be done by hand, which is slow and difficult.

It is hard to think of dangerous word pair examples, however the onus in on the advocates of National Graphic randomised intermediate letters to show that such problems will never occur.

Tabletop 04:17, 17 June 2006 (UTC)

Origin and Development of the Philosophy
Why is there nothing on the origins of this educational philosophy? It would be a good addition to the article.

Major Revision
I made major changes to the text of this article. I retained from the original author's work the clear substantive points made but took pains to reframe the article so that this controversial subject is treated neutrally. I do hope that I have accomplished that task. It SHOULD be clear that this is an area over which there is considerable debate, rancor, and disagreement. It SHOULD be clear that whole language has important benefits and that many have raised concerns. It SHOULD NOT seem like an endorsement of whole language or like it is supporting the "non-whole language" view.

As the previous poster suggested, I included some basic epistemological background. I am happy to discuss further revisions and share my understanding of this area with those interested.

--Kearnsdm 09:19, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

National Geographic Channel randomised intermediate letters goes haywire
An example of the National Geographic randomized intermediate spelling going haywire has surfaced. This week's Economist newspaper has a heading that read:


 * Tanzania - Bye bye poverty.

but due to greater familiarity with another place it was read as


 * Tasmania - Bye bye poverty.

OK, its not a perfect transposition, as an N is swapped with a M, and a S is swapped with a Z.

Nonetheless, such misunderstandings are asking for trouble in the long run. National Geographic fails to warn of any problems.

Tabletop 04:03, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

National Geographic Randomised Letters - Jump to conclusions
When using NGRIL, your eyes sometimes jump to conclusions:


 * Ivan Lazarev was of Armenian origin.
 * Ivan Lazarev was of American origin.

Tabletop 04:34, 4 October 2006 (UTC)

Chomsky
Was Chomsky really associated with the idea that written language should be imparted the way spoken language is? --Gargletheape 04:08, 31 December 2006 (UTC)

No, but Ken Goodman used to claim he was. Apparently he had bagels with Chomsky at breakfast during a conference in the early 1960s and Chomsky told Goodman that his work sounded interesting. That's all there is.


 * Chomsky's theory was about learning spoken language. Goodman applied Chomsky's theory and extended it to written language, asserting that just as children learn to speak "naturally" by being surrounded by people speaking, children learn to read "naturally" by being surrounded by print.


 * Not true. It's proven not to be true.  Nonetheless, the theory continues to be discussed and promoted by many.


 * Rosmoran (talk) 02:18, 20 February 2008 (UTC)

There is plenty of science that shows that children do indeed learn to read as they learn to speak. It is the same brain and the Language acquisition device Chomsky spoke of performs the same function in all four, speaking, listening, reading and writing. Show me the studies that show that being in a literacy rich environment, with lots of modeling and support doesn't lead to reading development. Emerging literacy happens in children 4-7 with little direct instruction. But one has to be able to read each child to know when to provide what kind of support to make learning optimum. Margaret Shaw Ph.D Reading, Language and Cognition — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.113.229.161 (talk) 20:17, 23 July 2019 (UTC)

Meaning-based phonics?
Is that like colour-based smell? Not to sound peevish, but I hope we as writers of this article are not products of this system. :) Some of it is a little opaque - but I'm afraid there isn't anything I can suggest. :(    Stevebritgimp (talk) 21:30, 19 February 2008 (UTC)


 * What should be communicated (in a non partisan way, which is why I don't try to write it myself!) is that many whole language proponents claim that they also "teach phonics." What teachers actually do is to point out individual letter/sound combinations opportunistically, that is, when they encounter a letter that the teacher knows students need help with -- these are called "mini lessons."  It's not meaning-based phonics.  It's really a way for whole language supporters to counter the resurgence of phonics as a useful method of early reading instruction.


 * Best, Rosmoran (talk) 02:25, 20 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I changed the offending sentence to "meaning-based word recognition" and added a clause specifically about phonics. Very funny. There's a complete discussion of whole language "phonics" in the "contrasts with phonics section." Rosmoran, I'm not sure if you were indicating you think that section should be changed or not. Take a look at it again, and maybe we can think of ways to strengthen it. I do think it covers a fair amount of the territory you mention above. Kearnsdm (talk) 05:38, 21 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm probably just showing my ignorance here, but I don't know what is meant by the term "meaning-based word recognition". Is this the (misguided) theory of using context to identify an unknown word, rather than looking at the orthographic representation of the unknown word?


 * Rosmoran (talk) 07:10, 21 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Hi rosmoran. Yes, what you're talking about is exactly what is advocated. Frank Smith (as recently as 2004) and Ken Goodman (as recently as 2003--I think that's the right year) are still saying phonics does no good. That view has been quite marginalized in a lot of the literature, but it's more prevalent than you might think. This idea of word recognition is also meaning-based in the sense that it happens in the context of reading quality literature for a comprehension purpose. There may be a better way to say all of this. Thoughts? Kearnsdm (talk) 04:43, 22 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Hi, Kearnsdm. I doubt I'd be surprised by the prevalence of this view --- I see it everywhere from elementary classrooms to university teacher programs.  Not too much in research literature, though, but whole language proponents explain this away by saying that "scientific" research is irrelevant for what they do.  Convenient, no?


 * Perhaps the focus of the section ought to be individual word identification, contrasting how whole language and phonics programs approach this issue.


 * If we can agree on this purpose, here's a proposed list of items to be communicated in this section:
 * Students are discouraged from using phonics to identify an unknown word
 * Students are encouraged to read the sentence and "guess" what word would work in context of the sentence (I think this is the "making meaning" part of word identification in whole language)
 * Mistaken word identification is acceptable if the meaning is not changed (for example, reading "pony" instead of "horse")
 * I'm sure I'm missing things, but it's a start. Let's shoot arrows at the strawman. :-)
 * Rosmoran (talk) 08:36, 23 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I think that's a great idea. However, I think we will actually need two subsections. The first should contain the information already in the "contrasts with phonics section" regarding "embedded phonics," which actually does mean phonics instruction. So, I think we should have the subsections, "Whole language word identification: embedded phonics" and "Whole language word identification: no phonics" (not these exact titles, but ones that communicate these ideas), because they are different.
 * Also, I think you're right about the "pony/horse" example; that's part of the three cuing systems idea that is mentioned in the article (i.e., reading is the product of three cuing systems which overlap and contribute uniquely to word identification and comprehension).
 * It will be especially important to have good references for all of this because, whether or not it's a straw man, it is not universally acknowledged to be one! I do have the original Goodman article (1967) if you'd like to take a look (I can e-mail it if you give me your e-mail address) as well as Pressley (2006), whose book Reading Instruction that Works gives a really clear explanation for why whole language for word identification could be problematic. It's also good because Pressley took a mixed methods approach and is pretty much liked by people on all sides of the issues.
 * Kearnsdm (talk) 17:39, 23 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Ha! I was referring to my proposed list of topics as a "strawman"!  Whole language proponents would most definitely not consider it a strawman.  In my experience, it rather seems to be a religion based on blind faith. (There I go showing my reading politics again ....)


 * I'll leave you my email address on your personal page.


 * Best, Rosmoran (talk) 23:17, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

Refimprove and OR
Very little of this article carries any citations and what is here goes far beyond synthesis of the provided documentation. I am tagging the entire page as original research and needing citation, pending a mass wipe of the unsupported claims, as I myself have not done sufficient research to cite/rewrite. For instance, the "Overview" contains a list of attributes that seem applicable to all reading education and are not clearly related specifically to whole language. This opacity would be easily resolved by providing a source for the list.

Yourself In Person (talk) 17:21, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

Edited Lede
I re-wrote the lede, adding what I think is a clearer statement of the fundamental principle underlying the whole language philosophy of reading, noting (with lots of relevant sourcing) that the principle has been discredited by both psychologists and linguists. I also summarized the current state of knowledge regarding the effects of the use of whole language based methods vs direct instruction in phonics on learning to read.

I also added a description of the recent events in Bethlehem PA ( https://www.npr.org/2019/01/02/677722959/why-millions-of-kids-cant-read-and-what-better-teaching-can-do-about-it )as an informative example of a district's experiences with the transition from the use of whole language approaches to phonics-focused approaches. Regutten (talk) 20:33, 29 January 2019 (UTC)

If all anyone gets from my post, please understand that whole language is NOT WHOLE WORD! I am a reading specialist who has used whole language and natural approaches and this is the worst misinformation of all. Learning whole words is not what Whole language is about. Whole language is about reading writing, speaking and listening to meaningful texts that have a purpose for the student. The science has not shown that whole language is inefficient and of course the whole in whole language means nothing is left out. However phonics instruction teaches decoding, not reading and if the child really doesn't know how to use it as only one of 3 tools, you teach them separately from when they read the whole text. Making a child sound out any word while reading interrupts the comprehension process. When many of us old folks learned to read using whole language before it was called that. Those large lined pads where teachers wrote stories that we dictated were done using the Language Experience approach, a basic component of Whole language. Unfortunately, a study was done during the GW Bush admin and not one reading specialist was included on the panel. It was a Metanalysis and the panel threw out those studies that didn't conclude what they were asked to conclude. Whole language is writing stories, reading real literature and depending more on what a student knows about the world than trying to sound out words and then trying to find out what they mean in an unfamiliar context. I taught all my students to read via whole language and my students, even those who spoke Spanish only when I began with them, to read and write for 14 years. The learned fast and didn't fall behind. Margaret Shaw Ph.D Reading, Language and Cognition — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.113.229.161 (talk) 20:10, 23 July 2019 (UTC)

"Discredited"
The use of the word "discredited" in the first sentence doesn't serve the overall tone and sentiment of the piece. I removed the word to allow the research to speak for itself. — Preceding unsigned comment added by EdHistory101 (talk • contribs) 11:57, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
 * It is discredited. Not to mention it has been idiotic from the start. Mikus (talk) 20:24, 12 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Lucy M Calkins' name appears nowhere in this article. Very odd. Hasn't she done loads to discredit Whole Language and its subsequent re-brandings? In Sept 2023 Columbia's affiliated teacher college "dissolved" her program and put her on sabbatical (i.e. into exile post public disgrace). 6lbr (talk) 15:18, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

edweek.org Lucy Calkins Revisits and Revises Her Reading Curriculum (Opinion) By Lucy Calkins — November 09, 2022 edweek.org Readers Had a Lot to Say About Lucy Calkins' Essay. Here's a Sampling (Opinion) December 13, 2022 Never Heard Of Lucy Calkins? Here’s Why You Should Have A flap over a popular curriculum sheds light on why many American kids struggle to read. by Natalie Wexler, Senior Contributor, Nov 14, 2021 In the Fight Over How to Teach Reading, This Guru Makes a Major Retreat Lucy Calkins, a leading literacy expert, has rewritten her curriculum to include a fuller embrace of phonics and the science of reading. Critics may not be appeased.

Lucy Calkins, an education professor, created a popular curriculum called “Units of Study,” built on a vision of children as natural readers and writers.

by Dana Goldstein, May 22, 2022

For decades, Lucy Calkins has determined how millions of children learn to read. An education professor, she has been a pre-eminent leader of “balanced literacy,” a loosely defined teaching philosophy.

Dana Goldstein is a national correspondent, writing about how education policies impact families, students and teachers across the country. She is the author of “The Teacher Wars: A History of America's Most Embattled Profession.” Amid Reading Wars, Teachers College Will Close a Star Professor’s Shop Lucy Calkins ran a beloved — and criticized — center at Teachers College for four decades. It is being dissolved.

By Dana Goldstein, NY Times, Sept. 8, 2023

In the urgent debate over how U.S. schools teach children to read, few figures have been as central as Lucy Calkins, the literacy professor and curriculum entrepreneur.
 * @6lbr, can you provide any references to support your claims? Also, please keep your comments constructive and avoid language that unnecessarily disparages Wikipedia. Revirvlkodlaku (talk) 15:49, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @6lbr, can you provide any references to support your claims? Also, please keep your comments constructive and avoid language that unnecessarily disparages Wikipedia. Revirvlkodlaku (talk) 15:49, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

Unbalanced?
I disagree that this article is unbalanced. The refs are thorough and the research is solid. It's certainly not glowing, but the information is clear. The editor that added the "Unbalanced" tag has done no other edits, and has given no justification for the addition of this tag. If they don't add some rationale, I'll be removing the tag. peterl (talk) 01:51, 1 December 2020 (UTC)


 * I would just add here that that the research itself is unbalanced, as noted in the Minority View of the National Reading Panel Report. The NRP Report has been taken up as the call to focus on skills-based instruction, but Yatvin, the author of the Minority View, cautioned against that. Similarly, Pressley (in a report adopted as a policy white paper by the Literacy Research Association) highlights the incomplete view of the field of research as experimental and quasi-experimental studies were the only ones considered by the NRP. So, the references may be sound, but the exclusion of citations that consider other viewpoints (e.g. qualitative research) in both the NRP Report and this article have a troubling effect on the public's perception of reading instruction. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.193.222.193 (talk) 14:37, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

Unbalanced Tag
As a former teacher of language arts, and a current professional in the field of teacher training, this article certainly IS "unbalanced." Leading with "discredited" is just one example of this unbalanced POV. I will be rewriting that description shortly, using widely accepted definitions of "whole language" used in education circles, and not the anti-whole language propagandistic description currently used. KevinHallward's Ghost (Let's talk) 22:35, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


 * I disagree. The seven strong references that were removed all support the use of that word. Please don't remove seven strong references. If there are other viewpoints that are not represented, and there are reliable sources for those, then feel free to add those. peterl (talk) 17:15, 10 December 2021 (UTC)


 * The references in question are cited in other parts of the article. And it doesn't MATTER if you "disagree." Many of those "references" are to sources with academic axes to grind against the theory. Either way, you don't lead with "discredited" in an article about a theory still in wide practice in educational circles. Don't remove the tag without far more justification than this. KevinHallward's Ghost (Let's talk) 20:12, 10 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Correct. Whether I disagree or not is not relevant. What I disagree with is your edit. What is relevant are valid, academic, well researched references. And the article leads with seven of those. There are seven good references that support the term "discredited". Is that unbalanced? Not if there is very good support for that statement - and there is. That the theory is still in wide practice is not relevant to this discussion. I could accept "discredited but widely practiced", but it's very clear that the theory is discredited. I acknowledge your background in education; like my background, unless one of your published works is being referenced, or there is a conflict of interest, your background is not relevant. You state that they have "academic axes to grind" - what is your support for that? I don't understand your "far more justification than this" statement - there's seven very good, clear references supporting that statement - and yes, there is more in the body. I'm restoring the "discredited" with refs, but will leave the "may be unbalanced tag. Feel free to discuss the "not discredited" viewpoint here. peterl (talk) 03:45, 11 December 2021 (UTC)


 * I have reworked the lede, without the inflammatory and non-NPOV "discredited" descriptor, but moving the scholarly view that there isn't support for the original view of "whole language" within the scholarly community. But it's a MUCH more nuanced discussion than just "discredited" implies, and this article should reflect that fact. KevinHallward's Ghost (Let's talk) 17:49, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Additionally, I just accessed as many of the "references" for that word that I could, and only one uses it in a REMOTELY similar context to what the non-NPOV version of the lede was doing. One of the references was non-accessible (a broken link) and another was to an offline book with which I'm unfamiliar. Because the rest of the article makes clear that the scholarly viewpoints have primarily moved away from whole language, there's simply no need to include a word like "discredited" in the very first line of the article. KevinHallward's Ghost (Let's talk) 17:57, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
 * The overwhelming scientific consensus is that whole language is an ineffective method of reading education. You can't just remove the citations that confirm this viewpoint then call it unsubstantiated. Shadybabs (talk) 13:41, 27 May 2022 (UTC)