Talk:Why (Taeyeon song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:35, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Add release year in brackets for her EP
 * I don't think that affect much the article's quality.


 * with elements from tropical house → with elements of tropical house


 * number six on Billboard → number six on the Billboard


 * Two music videos for the song were released → use "track" here for alternation
 * "track" is used when talking about a CD/physical release, therefore it is not applicable here


 * the first video was directed by → state "the first one" here for alternation


 * and was released simultaneously with the release of the song. → and premiered simultaneously with the single's release


 * The second one which is a dance version featuring Taeyeon performing the choreography to the song → The second visual, which is a dance version featuring Taeyeon performing choreography to the song,

Infobox

 * flawless ;)

Background and release

 * over 140,000 physical copies in South Korea → state "in that territory" here for alternation


 * number-one hit → number one hit
 * Not applicable because "number-one" is already an adjective, while "number one" is not


 * The lead single was "Starlight" → state "the lead one" here for alternation


 * single after "Starlight"; it was released → single after "Starlight", being made available (alternation)

Music and lyrics

 * "woozy" tropical house beat and likened the song's → comma before "and"


 * Release year for "Middle" in brackets

Reception

 * were enthusiastic the track's musical styles → was enthusiastic towards the track's musical styles


 * at number seven on the Gaon Digital Chart on the → at number seven on the aforementioned chart on the

Music videos

 * There are two accompanying music videos → Two accompanying music videos were shot
 * Current sentence is alright I think


 * was released simultaneously with the release of the single → premiered simultaneously with the single's release (alternation)


 * as the protagonist who desire → as the protagonist who desires


 * expressed: "Taeyeon shows → : to ,
 * I don't get this point


 * choreography to the song → choreography created for the song

Promotion

 * Subsequently following the release → comma after "Subsequently"


 * on a series of concert → on a series of concerts

Charts

 * U.S. → US

Copy-violation

 * 17.4% is super!

Images

 * Sample seems stable ;)

Links

 * 1 problem here! Please fix!!

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:37, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! — Simon (talk) 02:47, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * You're welcome! Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:25, 1 January 2017 (UTC)