Talk:Why Does It Hurt So Bad/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Candy  o32  - Merry CHRISTmas :)  19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * Better to just say 1996 MTV Movie Awards

Composition

 * Link R&B ballad.


 * Questioning Pandora reliability, see on your talk.
 * Removed Pandora reference.

Reception
"Sailed" isn't very common so put it in quotation marks


 * TIME is a magazine so say of TIME not of the TIME


 * To avoid using those brackets, say "...of TIME say Houston "particularly held her own," with a "masterly balance of pop zip and soulful melancholy."


 * Put Shoop Shopp in quotations as it is a song.

Music video

 * Most articles would say 1996 MTV Movie Awards.

Everything else unnoted sounds good ! Candy o32  - Merry CHRISTmas :)  19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)