Talk:Wide Awake in Europe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:05, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

Comments A few minor issues, I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * "A limited number of EPs were produced" it would be better if we knew how many, as quite obviously it would have been impossible to produce an unlimited number.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * "Among the three tracks is "Mercy""... I imagine for a couple of extra words, you could add the names of the other two tracks!
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * You have USEng (organizers) but BritEng dates (26 November 2010). Be consistent.
 * ✅ Changed to USEng dates. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * "on 26 November 2010 (Black Friday)" I don't think you need to reiterate Black Friday yet again.
 * ✅ Removed this part. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * " Because only 5000 copies were created, the availability to record stores was limited" again, it seems like stating the obvious here, but I know what you're trying to say.... can we re-phrase a bit?
 * ✅ Removed this part. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Don't think you need to link roulette.
 * ✅ Removed. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Any reason why Dublin and Brussels are linked and Paris isn't?
 * ✅ Linked paris. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)