Talk:Widerøe Flight 710/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:51, 3 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Lead looks very well. No issues here.


 * Flight
 * "He had a total flight time of 6,458, of which 85 hours was" --> "He had a total flight time of 6,458 hours, of which 85 were"
 * "The aircraft had during the morning of 6 May been used" Why not put "been used" before "during the morning"?
 * "which is received permission to" which is? You can remove "permission to" to avoid breaking the sentence.
 * "The first first point on the checklist"...
 * "Three second later" Seconds


 * Cause
 * Nothing here


 * Salvage
 * Good


 * Aftermath
 * Nothing here


 * Okay. Everything seems very good. Awaiting to pass. — ΛΧΣ  21  00:51, 4 January 2013 (UTC)


 * I've gone through and made the changes you listed. Lukeno94 (talk) 13:30, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Passed :) — ΛΧΣ  21  13:34, 12 January 2013 (UTC)