Talk:Wild Law

Rewrite
The entire article should be completely rewritten - the current version reads like a blurb from the publisher. Addhoc 13:24, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Fact and check tags
I'll remove all the sections tagged with fact and check tomorrow. Addhoc 13:18, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Hi there,

I think that is a little hasty. The creator of this and several realated articles has shown the ability and willingness to add references to the articles when the need was pointed out. This is not WP:BLP and nothing stated in the article is of earth-shattering importance if not immediately sourced. Give it a few days. Thanks!--killing sparrows 20:57, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Citation problem
As I've pointed out on wild law, there is a problem with the first citation. The source is merely a one-paragraph description of the book which does not actually state the matter asserted. I'd like to see a better citation. Coming to this as one who has not yet read the book but has a great interest in the topic, I consider this a serious flaw - if I didn't click on the link I'd think that I knew what the book was generally about, but when I click on the link I think you're filling me full of it. Doug. 03:43, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

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BetacommandBot 07:41, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

promotional
This article still reads like PR. Lesley, this article (and other WP articles) should describe the subject in question rather than only trying to justify why the subject is notable. That would mean, more or less: (a) what the book is about, (b) the impact of the book (in neutral terms!), (c) criticism of the book. Too much of this article is the (b) section, and it reads like a press release rather than an encyclopedia article (i.e. it needs to be more neutral in its tone, see WP:NPOV). Benwing (talk) 04:57, 27 July 2009 (UTC)