Talk:Wild Thorns by Sahar Khalifeh

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2018 and 11 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Reema.asia.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:53, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Veronica's peer review
The summary of the article is clear- it presents a fluid and chronological account of Wild Thorns. The summary section gives a thorough presentation of the plot; the reader is well situated in Usama's journey including his angst in realizing he may inadvertently harm his cousin. The reader is given enough details about the characters, such as Adil's complicated relationship with his Israeli employers. But I'm wondering if the summary needs additional information mainly because the first paragraph is lengthier than the following two paragraphs (perhaps there is more to add?).

The characters are under another heading, which makes it easier to read the article. This section also provides additional information about the novel. Questions I have include the following: is there one narrator in the book? Who are the protagonist? Are there peripheral characters that are essential to the plot?

There are a few minor grammatical errors, but I suspect this page is still under review and in draft form. Overall, this draft is well balanced and reads quite well.

Peer Review
Hi! I thought that your lead into the article was very engaging. The plot and characters are well defined and the book seems like it would be a really good and important one to read. I like that you included specific plot details summary about the things that sound very interesting about the book. It was good that you were able to show the importance of the subject matter without telling it in opinion. I think that this was a great article! Graiperins (talk) 06:24, 6 November 2018 (UTC)

feedback
Looks great. Do you want to add a "book" box - - see this page for example. Otherwise, I think you're ready to go live. Profhanley (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:07, 27 November 2018 (UTC)