Talk:Wild Woody/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 13:00, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

A game that's destined to fail, as it seems. Reviewing this article.  Gerald WL  13:00, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Images and lead

 * File:Wild Woody Gameplay.jpg has some "NA"s. Please fill them.
 * Please add alt texts to assist those with screen readers.
 * "and it failed to make a commercial impact." I don't see any statements in Reception stating that it "failed to make a commercial impact."
 * It's in the last sentence of Reception's first paragraph: "Wild Woody failed to make a commercial impact, which Lanford attributed to its late release in the 16-bit era, questionable character design and standard platforming gameplay." Cat&#39;s Tuxedo (talk) 20:52, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Gameplay

 * I remember a version of this article having a plot section. They are allowed to be included, so if you can, please do so. This should be placed below "Gameplay".
 * in which the player controls the titular character. Woody is an anthropomorphic pencil -- suggest changing to in which the player controls the titular character Woody, an anthropomorphic pencil.
 * Suggest linking totem pole as it is uncommon word.

Development and release

 * Suggest linking game engine within "engine".

Reception

 * Suggest paraphrasing some quotes to lessen copyright stuff. I see stuff that can be.
 * "Doug Lanford agreed that the title"-- "In response, Doug Lanford agreed that the title".  Gerald WL  13:00, 20 January 2021 (UTC)


 * All done Cat&#39;s Tuxedo (talk) 20:52, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Salute for that quick change. Now I just have two concerns on the plot. After this I'll give MOS:VG a last check.


 * "...the totem pole's power would be released; the totem pole segments scatter and create parallel universes for themselves, which threatens to destroy the world." Repetitive use of totem pole. Suggest changing the second mention to "it".
 * Suggest giving the sentences starting from "Under Low Man's instruction" a standalone paragraph. So the plot has two paragraphs. Much cleaner in my view.  Gerald WL  02:17, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
 * And done. Cat&#39;s Tuxedo (talk) 03:25, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , and all good! I've added a portal bar; now it's GA. Hold on a second for that.  Gerald WL  04:20, 21 January 2021 (UTC)