Talk:Wildfire (Silver Dollar City)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:47, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments A few minor issues, so I'm putting this on hold for a short period. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:40, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Lead is a little light, it should summarise the major aspects of the article.
 * Is it Wildfire or Wildfire? Infobox and article title need to be italicised if the latter.
 * Lead says it has a "loop", main body calls it (and links it to) a vertical loop. Be consistent.
 * "General Statistics" in the infobox should be "General statistics"
 * Article says a 2-minute ride, the link says 2 minutes, 16 seconds.
 * "themed.... themed..." touch repetitive.
 * Under Ride experience you relink hill lift but not cobra roll, need for consistency within the article.
 * Fill refs out, e.g. ref 11 really has a title of "Amusement Today’s 2005 Golden Ticket Awards", an author name of Tim Baldwin, and with so many pages, you should specify a page or range within the whole article which will assist the reader.
 * Ref 13 title needs an en-dash rather than a spaced hyphen.


 * I think I have addressed all of these. Themeparkgc   Talk  23:44, 5 August 2013 (UTC)