Talk:Wildflower (The Avalanches album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 23:29, 27 November 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * studio album by Australian electronic music group → you can use "recorded by Australian" here for better fashion
 * The album's production was stalled due → use "The record's" here for alternation
 * Add year of release in brackets for King Kong'
 * fashion to making a mixtape → fashion of making a mixtape
 * Release year in brackets for "Frankie Sinatra"
 * Link "Critics" to Music journalism
 * The album was also a commercial success → The record also experienced commercial success (alternation + WP:FANCRUFT)
 * it was a number-one album in the band's home country of Australia and a top-ten album in Scotland and the UK. → it reached number one in the band's native Australia and the top 10 in Scotland and the United Kingdom
 * They plan to release these tracks "within a year" → use "songs" here for alternation
 * provide a fresh start → omit "fresh" here as it's unencyclopedic

Infobox

 * flawless ;)

Background

 * was with Luke Steele in 2003 creating → comma before "creating"
 * Release year of "Colours" in brackets
 * considered for the album, but no estimated → state "record" here for alternation
 * album's delay, however no new →, to ;
 * providing a track name of "Frank Sinatra" → providing a track named "Frank Sinatra"
 * musician David Berman reading a poem he composed → comma before "reading"
 * combined into a new album. This was a similar process → combined into a new album, marking a similar process
 * In regard to the group's second album → use "the band's" here for alternation
 * February 2014: "Album sounds → : to ,

Production and composition

 * because he was using Studio Vision → for his Studio Vision
 * The group worked with multiple guest → state "The band" here for alternation
 * and violinist Warren Ellis featured → ...was featured
 * Release year for Madvillainy in brackets
 * Release year for Uptown Saturday Night in brackets
 * every track on the album → use "record" here for alternation
 * was done by Pat Shannahan in Los Angeles who also cleared → comma before "who"
 * The track would have not been → use "the song" here for alternation
 * not be cleared.[8][18][3][25] → refs in numerical order
 * release these tracks that were closely related to Wildflower → use "these recordings" here for alternation

Styles and themes

 * Unlink Australia as it's a common term
 * for the quote, fix - to –
 * Add release year for There's a Riot Goin' On in brackets
 * draw from the album's rebellious counter-culture nature, but their cover has a more psychedelic style → draw from the record's rebellious counter-culture nature, however approaching a more psychedelic style.

Release

 * May, the group posted a video → use "the band" here for alternation
 * Link "lead single" to its respective article here
 * after the track debut → after the track's debut
 * The album was promoted through a heavy advertising → use "It" here for alternation
 * with TV → write out here to "television"

Reception

 * Link "critics" to Music critics here, as well
 * radio DJ → radio disc jockey
 * foggy sound... reveals → foggy sound [...] reveals
 * and ultimately calling the album "a faded → "calling" to "called"

Track listing

 * Remove all album credit citations from "Contains samples of", and add the sentence "Credits adapted from the liner notes of Wildflower.[57]" atop the subtopic

Personnel

 * Credits according to album notes:[57] → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Wildflower.[57]

Charts

 * flawless ;)

Release history

 * Unlink formats and labels
 * Add references to the release on 1 July and 8 July

Copy-violation

 * 47.4% is WAY too much! Please look for the first two sources at the top of the list and reduce the content from them in the article's body

Images and others

 * Images and samples perfectly illustrate the article
 * Sample seems stable ;)

Links

 * No problems here!

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Wow, BRILLIANT article; so few comments for such a long page ;) Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:38, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review, I addressed all your comments. My only concern is with the copy-vio. The reason for the high percentage is because the song titles are being flagged and each source had a long quote which was brought over. I'm not sure that calls for any editing? TarkusAB  18:43, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! The article was GA even without my comments (It's ok with the COPYVIO thing now) ;) Best and congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:47, 26 December 2016 (UTC)