Talk:William Beynon

To do to improve
Please cross off these when they have been completed. Thanks. CJLippert 02:07, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * photo would be nice
 * in-line citation
 * a bit more citation (there is a good start already)
 * any more external links available?
 * the current article comes off sounding mre like a list without being a list, so wordsmithing is needed
 * maybe if more details are added to each of the periods described the article would sound less like a list
 * along with the wordsmithing, punctuation style would be prudent.