Talk:William Bragge

Sentence needs work from someone who knows about the donation
I just fixed up some of the language in the article, but the sentence "Bragge donated his collected items to the Birmingham Free Library, including his 1500 volume Cervantes collection in 1873 and study of tobacco collection." could use help. If the tobacco collection was donated at the same time as the Cervantes, just moving "in 1873" to the end would help a great deal; if not, something else should be done. Peter Delmonte (talk) 00:17, 13 June 2008 (UTC)