Talk:William F. Banholzer

Avoid less important achievements
It is best to avoid his less-important achievements such as things he did through the normal course of employment. Also avoid anything that is backed primarily by a press-release or by something written as a result of a recent press release. They make the article sound self-promotional rather than encyclopedic. Please see recent edit summaries by me for additional information. davidwr/ (talk)/(contribs)  20:34, 18 November 2013 (UTC)