Talk:William George Malone/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:13, 27 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Put all titles in the References section into title case.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Give the name of the movie.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)


 * emigrated to New Zealand to join the Malone brothers to join "them"
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Missing word, I think: reinforcements to Chunuk Bair immediately it was captured
 * Sorted. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)


 * No DABs, external links good, pictures appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, it is greatly appreciated. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)