Talk:William L. Uanna/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 15:05, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * A few comments:
 * Are you sure ancestry.com is the only source for his father's and mother's names?
 * I've added an additional source, from the 1940 census. Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Only an isbn or an oclc is needed, not both.
 * WP:CITE does not say "but not both". Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * External links typically go after the references.
 * Moved. Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Ref #2 is a dead link.
 * It works for me, but you may need a newspapers.com subscription. Added a "subscription required" tag to the reference. Fixed two instances of link rot I found. Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * The first long cite should have an identifier.
 * Added OCLC. Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC)


 * All from me--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:05, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review! Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing, Well done!--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:19, 2 September 2015 (UTC)