Talk:William Shirley/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 06:57, 26 April 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:57, 26 April 2013 (UTC)


 * the emission of paper currency Is this some sort of technical term used by bankers? Because I nearly laughed out loud. Perhaps printing?
 * Samuel Adams (father of famous American Revolution leader) Missing "the"
 * I know what you're trying to say here, but this is awkward: competing for resources from the same supply pools
 * Overlinking Maine, Royal Navy, King's Chapel, baronet, Shirley-Eustis House
 * No DABs.
 * The orbital photo of the Bahamas is kind of interesting, but not all that informational. Show the reader where the Bahamas were.
 * Photos appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:00, 29 April 2013 (UTC)


 * I think I've addressed these. ("Emission" is actually somewhat commonly used in histories that deal with the colonial currency debates of the 18th century.)  Magic ♪piano 00:45, 30 April 2013 (UTC)