Talk:William Susman

encyclopedia article or resumé?
it reads like self promotion. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Zimmermanstein (talk • contribs) 21:55, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

This article does fall under Wikipedia guidelines and its tone does reflect an encyclopedia. The comment above uses a pseudonym which is an ethnic slur and should be removed to avoid legal action. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.126.208.178 (talk) 22:26, 7 August 2014 (UTC)

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This article's tone or style may not reflect the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia. See Wikipedia's guide to writing better articles for suggestions. (February 2013)

Thank you for your comments. Please indicate where the tone or style of this article does not reflect an encyclopedic tone used by Wikipedia so that we may adjust it accordingly.

The bulk of this article has been on Wikipedia for several years without objection. Please explain why Wikipedia is now objecting to the tone and style of the content which has not been significantly modified for several years. (April 2013) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Foothillpark (talk • contribs) 14:11, 3 April 2013‎


 * See WP:OSE. Toccata quarta (talk) 04:47, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Removed large segments of material on page to better reflect wikipedia's style. (July 2013) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ambulancechaser (talk • contribs) 21:07, 16 July 2013 (UTC)