Talk:Willie Hammerstein

Nicely done
A beautiful page.

I've never seen the editing technique of writing each sentence on its own line, but it's a great idea!

(I think there's a typo at the beginning of the last paragraph under Acts.) Vzeebjtf (talk) 19:09, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

Rialto
"[T]he first movie palace in Times Square" is a bit misleading. The Strand opened in 1914 on the northwest corner of Broadway and 47th Street, and while that may not technically be in Times Square, it's close enough for jazz. How about "an early movie palace"? Vzeebjtf (talk) 19:23, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I prefer to stick to what the source said, since it seems accurate and I am picky about strictly following the sources, but have added a footnote on the Strand Theatre. I agree that it is very close to Times Square. Aymatth2 (talk) 01:41, 21 May 2014 (UTC)