Talk:Winghead shark/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 17:31, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Happy to offer some thoughts. J Milburn (talk) 17:31, 24 May 2013 (UTC)


 * "This species inhabits shallow waters close to shore" How shallow are we talking?
 * Surprisingly, none of the many sources I have give this, which leads me to believe it hasn't been quantified.


 * "Pregnant females have been reported to quarrel with each other.[4]" Why? What does this entail? Is this unusual? (I'm just trying to get an idea of its significance.)
 * I'd like to know more about it too, but this is the only information given in the source.


 * "Sexual maturity is reached at around 1.0–1.1 m (3.3–3.6 ft) long for males and 1.1–1.2 m (3.6–3.9 ft) long for females." What sort of age is this? Do we know?
 * This is not stated anywhere that I know of.


 * "Its meat, fins" Perhaps we could have a little about how the meat/fins are used?
 * Sentence expanded.

Generally very strong, as ever. I made a few tweaks. Sourcing and images seem solid. J Milburn (talk) 17:56, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 01:59, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Great, happy to promote. Certainly a review on the shorter side, but I'm happy that this is ready. J Milburn (talk) 10:41, 26 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 17:22, 26 May 2013 (UTC)