Talk:Winifred Dunn

Three Comments for Peer Review:

1. Your grammar and punctuation were inconsistent throughout the entry. Remember that commas and periods should always go inside quotation marks, and citations should always be inserted after commas and periods. There were also a number of run-on sentences in the article, so be cautious of properly punctuating sentences in the future. The subject of your article should also be refereed to either by her full name or last name, but never her first name alone. You had a mixture of all three used throughout the page, so for the sake of consistency and maintaining a professional and objective tone throughout your article, only refer to her as "Winifred Dunn" in each subsection when first mentioning her by name, and then simply as "Dunn" following that.

2. Include an infobox at the top-right of the page. Incorporate into it her date of birth, occupation, where she was born, where she lived, the companies she was associated with, her former spouse, and any other relevant information. Also insert a picture of her at the top of the infobox if there is one available.

3. There were consistent issues with the coding in the subheadings. For future reference, you do not need to put the bold text code in for subheadings because the subheading code automatically makes the text bold. Using the bold text code for a subheading only makes the text appear bold inside the table of contents when it is generated, which makes the blue color of said section more darker than the others instead of keeping with the consistent color. Asbeebe (talk) 13:50, 6 December 2016 (UTC)