Talk:Winston E. Willis

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Talk: Winston E. Willis

Day Street (talk) 06:27, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

I see no reason to delete this article, needs serious revisions though. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cleveland84 (talk • contribs) 17:59, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Phrasing
Stuff like this "Miraculously, his petition was accepted and docketed." - has to go. See WP:NPOV Rich Farmbrough, 19:04, 6 August 2009 (UTC).
 * This whole article is a disaster of unencyclopedic commentary and phrasing. One can only assume it's being significantly guided by the individual in question, or someone intimately associated with him. Definitely needs some neutral, 3rd Party guidance. LoverOfArt (talk) 04:51, 11 August 2012 (UTC)