Talk:Winter white dwarf hamster/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GRAPPLE   X  19:23, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:


 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Still think there could be more work done on the lead, but I'll do that myself now. Ready to pass now that that's done. Well done! GRAPPLE   X  21:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Still think there could be more work done on the lead, but I'll do that myself now. Ready to pass now that that's done. Well done! GRAPPLE   X  21:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

Query
"yellow blue fawn" sounds odd to me, can someone with access to the sources check this shouldn't be two different colours such as "yellow, blue fawn". Ta  Ϣere Spiel  Chequers  13:03, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
 * The book says yellow blue fawn.  Puffin  Let's talk! 19:20, 6 September 2011 (UTC)