Talk:Wisconsin dairy industry/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Images are free to use.
 * "ageing" "aging" (American English)
 * "later half" "latter half" (both uses)
 * Remove the comma after "the farms".
 * Remove the comma after "the railroad" (unnecessary).
 * Remove the comma after "switched to dairy farming" (near the end of sentence).
 * "to higher" "to a higher"
 * "products has" "products have"
 * Remove the comma after "2000".
 * "Wisconsin have" "Wisconsin has"
 * Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).
 * Also, don't try to have website links (ex. "www." and ".org") present in the "|website=" parameter (find the actual name of the source instead).
 * , I fixed what you recommended. JackFromReedsburg (talk &#124; contribs) 20:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)