Talk:Wishin' and Hopin' (Grey's Anatomy)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 20:38, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Lead: Remove unneeded comma before Grey's Anatomy
 * Lead: "and the 50th episode overall" to "and the show's 50th episode overall"
 * Lead: "It aired on the ABC in the United States on February 1, 2007" → "The episode originally aired on the American Broadcasting Company (ABC) in the United States on February 1, 2007". To many "it"'s in the main paragraph
 * Production: Link executive producer
 * Reception: No need for "Thursday"
 * Reception: "IGN Entertainment" to "IGN"
 * References: Ref. 1 - Remove the IMDb source, as per WP:IMDB and WP:RS. It isn't a good source
 * References: Authors should be like "West, Kelly", not "Kelly West". Thanks. Use the "first" and "last" parameter for this.

Good work. On hold. TBrandley 21:29, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for your review. All issues have been addressed. Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 09:21, 8 July 2012 (UTC)