Talk:Witch of Agnesi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Power~enwiki (talk · contribs) 23:16, 3 July 2018 (UTC)

I'll do a first pass today, and will respond on Thursday to comments, but otherwise am unavailable until next Monday. That shouldn't be too much of a delay.


 * Thanks for the review. I have made the following changes in response:
 * Copyedited the start of the Equations section to be less technical.
 * Removed the bullets in the Properties section.
 * Formatted the OED reference like the other ones (i.e. using citation to generate Citation Style 2).
 * Added the identity of the curve to the caption of the figure.
 * Removed the water wave figure as it didn't correspond to anything in the text and I couldn't find a source for waves having this shape.
 * —David Eppstein (talk) 02:19, 4 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good at a quick glance, though I don't have time to do a full copy-edit pass today. power~enwiki ( π, ν ) 19:24, 4 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I've read through the entire article again and everything is good. Passing. power~enwiki ( π,  ν ) 19:25, 5 July 2018 (UTC)