Talk:With You (Kaskade and Meghan Trainor song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 20:48, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Will take this on tomorrow --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:48, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Kyle. I would also like to invite you to comment at Trainor's featured article nomination should you find some time later.--NØ 07:51, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Cover art needs alt text
 * Writer(s) and Producer(s) should be bullet points instead of hlist
 * WP:OVERLINK of Meghan Trainor in the infobox
 * "and American singer-songwriter" → "and singer-songwriter"
 * "Kaskade co-wrote the track with" → "Kaskade and Trainor co-wrote the track with"
 * "Richard Beynon and Thomas Shaw, and" → "Richard Beynon, and Thomas Shaw, while Kaskade"
 * "Released on June 14, 2019," → "Released as a single on June 14, 2019," with the appropriate target
 * "it is an electropop song and lyrically talks about" → "the song is an electropop track. The lyrics talk about"
 * "The song received positive reviews from critics." there are not enough reviews to back up this claim
 * "Commercially, it reached" → "Commercially, "With You" reached"
 * "additionally managing to reach" → "additionally managing to enter"
 * ""With You" received an animated video as well as an official" → "An animated video was released for it, as well as a" with the target
 * "a Remix EP featuring" → "a Remix EP, featuring"
 * "Loris Cimino and Dexter," → "Loris Cimino, and Dexter,"

Background and promotion

 * Retitle to Background and release
 * Remove wikilink on Kaskade
 * "Gorgon City and Roméo" → "Gorgon City, and Roméo"
 * "He co-wrote "With You"" → "Him and Trainor co-wrote "With You""
 * "Richard Beynon and Thomas Shaw, and" → "Richard Beynon, and Thomas Shaw, while Kaskade"
 * "Kaskade enlisted Meghan Trainor as" → "Kaskade enlisted Trainor as"
 * "the track, and said that" → "the track, saying that"
 * "yes for me. I knew we could" → "yes for me". He continued, stating that he knew they "could"
 * "While the former stated that" → "Trainor stated that"
 * [3][4] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
 * Wikilink social media to itself
 * "on June 10, 2019.[5] A snippet" → "on June 10, 2019, while a snippet"
 * [5][6] should both be solely at the end of the sentence in new order
 * "and streaming on June 14" → "and streaming as a single on June 14 of that year"
 * "to contemporary hit radio in Italy" → "to contemporary hit radio as a single in Italy"
 * "June 28, and the US" → "June 28, and the United States"
 * "and Epic Records respectively" → "and Epic Records, respectively"
 * "in the latter country on August 5, 2019" → "as a single in the US on August 5, 2019"
 * "Columbia Records released a Remix EP" → "Columbia released a Remix EP"
 * "featuring remixes of it" → "including remixes of it"
 * "Loris Cimino and Dexter" → "Loris Cimino, and Dexter"

Composition and reception

 * Wikilink tempo to itself
 * "sending her mixed signals" → "delivering mixed signals to her"
 * "she could be using her time better" → "she could be making better usage of her time"
 * "song finds her" → "song finds Trainor
 * Target chorus to Refrain
 * Dancing Astronaut should not be italicised
 * Target digestibility to Digestion
 * "it, and that" → "it and that"
 * Target synth to Synthesizer
 * Remove Radio.com since that is literally the only review cited here; the other two are just explaining the composition
 * "reached number 15 on the" → "reached number 15 on the Billboard"
 * "on the Adult Top 40 chart," → "on the Adult Top 40 chart."
 * "and numbers 12 and 31" → "It further peaked at number 12 and 31"
 * "charts respectively" → "charts, respectively"
 * "It earned a number 46 placement on the Year-end" → "The song ranked at number 46 on the year-end US"
 * "chart, and additionally charted" → "chart for 2019, while additionally charted"

Promotion

 * Retitle to Music videos and promotion, since the Live performance subsection is one sentence which can go in the last para of the merged sub-sections

Music videos

 * "An accompanying animated video for "With You" was" → "An accompanying animated video was" with the target
 * "explore a psychedelic outer space. It commences" → "explore a psychedelic outer space and the video commences"
 * Sure there isn't any appropriate target for psychedelic?
 * "controlling a spaceship and crashing" → "controlling a spaceship that she crashes"
 * "rocky terrain which is populated" → "rocky terrain, which is populated"
 * "mystical superpowers, and Trainor can cast" → "mystical superpowers and Trainor is able to cast"
 * "eyes, which grow trees" → "eyes that grow trees"
 * Remove target on Billboard
 * "described it as" → "described the music video as"
 * Entertainment Tonight Canada should be italicised
 * Wikilink technicolor to itself
 * "the official music video was released" → "the music video for "With You" was released"
 * "Idolator's Mike Wass described the visuals" → "Wass described the visuals of it"
 * "as she was" → "stating that she was"
 * Add the live performance sentence straight after the above one in the same para

Live performance

 * "Kaskade and Trainor performed "With You" for the first time, on Today, on September 13, 2019." → "On September 13, 2019, Kaskade and Trainor performed "With You" on Today for further promotion."

Track listing

 * Good

Personnel

 * Retitle to Credits and personnel
 * Wikilink Meghan Trainor to herself

Weekly charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Year-end charts

 * See above

Release history

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Format → Format(s)
 * The refs should all be centered
 * Remixes → Remix EP

Final comments and verdict

 * , nice article that needs some improvements. --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:27, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I have gone ahead and done everything. I added a couple more reviews and kept the line about the song receiving "positive reviews", and the stuff from Radio.com.--NØ 09:41, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * You will need to add another review to verify that it was positive since three is not enough and mention what was praised in the lead, plus I have split the Composition and reception section for you. Also, add a third citation under the various release... maybe Venezuela or China if they have Apple Music; if not that then some popular place like Australia. --Kyle Peake (talk) 12:13, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Done.--NØ 12:26, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, ✅! --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:43, 24 June 2020 (UTC)