Talk:Wolf & I/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:25, 23 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and I'm going to review this GAN for possible GA submission.

Lead

 * Connect the two opening sentences
 * and RCA Records. It was issued as a CD single, featuring two other singles from the eponymous album. → and RCA Records, with the recording being issued as a CD single, featuring two other singles from the eponymous album.
 * You use the word "track" two consecutive times; try to change it
 * critics → music critics + link to music journalism
 * called it among the best on the parent album → called it one of the highlights on the parent album
 * released to → released onto
 * 2010, in → remove comma
 * was performed live → was sung live; word repetition

Background and composition

 * a wolf pack; → end sentence here
 * stated "it's the type of erotic fairytale [Welch] would sell her kneecaps for". → stated that "it's the type of erotic fairytale [Welch] would sell her kneecaps for".
 * claimed "the → claimed that "the
 * compared it to → compared "Wolf & I" to
 * described it → described the recording
 * You use the word "described" two times in-a-row here
 * stated how → remove "how"
 * adding how → adding that

Critical reception

 * called it a "sweet → called the recording a "sweet
 * album songs → you use the word "song" consecutively
 * stating the → stating that the
 * You use the word "stated" two times in-a-row here
 * stated "however → stated that "however

Promotion

 * single "Sun of a Gun" → add comma before "Sun of a Gun"
 * uploaded to → uploaded onto
 * account → channel
 * in support of the release of Oh Land → in order to support the release of Oh Land
 * a drummer. → a drummer.[12]
 * You use the word "perform" two times in-a-row here
 * The blogger behind Alfitude.com → Kieron Tyler from website Alfitude
 * stating "she → stating that "she

Credits and personnel

 * from Oh Land liner notes → from the liner notes of Oh Land
 * You may want to list the recording studios

Release history

 * Use wikitable unsortable plainrowheaders
 * Use !scope="row"| for United States
 * Use a "/" (slash) for listing the labels

Outcome of GAN review
for 7 days. Apart from some word repetitions and minor grammar issues, this article is well-written and referenced. Good job, Carbrera! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:06, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
 * All finished. Thanks for the review as always. Carbrera (talk) 22:16, 23 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing. Congrats! Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:12, 24 July 2016 (UTC)