Talk:Woman of the Year (Parks and Recreation)/GA1

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Reviewer:  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 22:39, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this as part of April's GAN Backlog Elimination drive. It's good, but I'm placing it on hold until issues can be addressed.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 22:39, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Very little issues here so I'll give some brief stuff; fix em and I'll pass it:
 * "believes is her congratulatory letter as the group's Woman of the Year award." → "letter as the recipient of the group's"
 * Fixed. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "who contributes $5,000. Tom still needs $1,000" → that math doesn't add up considering he needs $10,000 in total.
 * Clarified. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * When does the girls' soccer team appear? The production mentions the coach of the team, but I don't see how he works into the plot.
 * It was part of a cold open that I didn't mention in the plot summary because it had little to do with the rest of the episode. I tried to explain it better in the production section. Let me know if this is better and if not, I'll add it to the plot section. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The t-shirt references are broken: they link to the main page of the site.
 * The t-shirts seem to have been removed from the site, so I took the references out altogether. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "When Ron said he is attracted to strong and powerful women, Leslie admitted he attends a shocking number of Women's National Basketball Association games.[1][2]" Who says what now?
 * I tried to make this more clear. Let me know if it works. If not, feel free to remove the sentence altogether. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "In its original American NBC broadcast on March 4, 2010, "Galentine's Day" was seen[...]" Wrong episode title here ;)
 * Fixed. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Alright, thanks Hunter for taking care of the above issues, and as always brilliant work. I'm passing this. Cheers,  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 02:54, 4 April 2010 (UTC)