Talk:Women's Institute for Science, Equity and Race

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 * Hey Emily, you did a great job with this article. I didn't know the NEA and WISER were linked by Rhonda Sharpe, but I do now. I think adding a little more detail on your sources would be good when you bring them up, like who the author is and what the context of the study was. Otherwise, you added a great article to Wikipedia that is easy to read and informative. Nice! Ojc1 (talk) 19:39, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi Emily, this article is really well written and organized. The information is concise and easy to understand by a nonexpert. I think this article might benefit from a little rewording of the lead to ensure that the statements do not come across as biased by including the name of the study from which they were pulled from. Additionally, it might be helpful to add some studies from others aside from Sharpe under the research section to ensure there is a wide range of views represented. However, I understand that Sharpe had the greatest contribution due to the fact that she founded the institution so great job!V.a.PJHC (talk) 03:52, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

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