Talk:Women's health in India/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 06:33, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Two immediate comments:

-- I have split it into three short paragraphs. The article covers so many topis from a wide range of subjects, it is difficult to summarize! --Tito Dutta (talk • contributions • email) 19:05, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * the lead is too short for the article. It should be of up to four paragraphs, and should summarize the article's main sections. Thus, a paragraph on gender bias, one on healthcare problems, and one on outcomes would seem reasonable.

-- ✅ removed few entries! --Tito Dutta (talk • contributions • email) 19:05, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * the 'See also' list is too long or perhaps altogether undesirable. For example, 'women in India' is already linked in the lead and can readily be linked in the first paragraph of 'Gender bias...', and then removed from the list. Probably most other items can be treated similarly. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:33, 7 June 2013 (UTC)


 * The article is arguably under-illustrated. You might like to consider using a variety of images such as

Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:02, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
 * The article mentions the problems only but not the way India is attempting to solve them. I am unsure if these images are relevant to the article. I have added on image! --Tito Dutta (talk • contributions • email) 19:17, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. I think the article is of acceptable standard now, having also done some cleaning up. I agree that there is scope for more on solutions as those are developed and documented. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:50, 9 June 2013 (UTC)