Talk:Women's rights in Myanmar

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I think the article is at a good starting point. I really like the sections you have written in the sandbox, but the article as a whole needs some work. The article is strong in its use of media. I really like where the images are, and that they align with the information in the article that they are related to. The lead section can definitely be improved. It seems to be a bit too broad, and not related entirely to the article as a whole. There are also some issues with grammar throughout the article that make it challenging to read and understand. Honestly, the parts that you have written in the sandbox are fine, but the existing article needs some help. Some sections also need citations desperately, particularly the section on Ethnic Minorities in Myanmar. I think the article is well-developed, and there appears to be good information on each of the sections that provide a good summary of the topic. I think this article could overall benefit from a readthrough but is at a good starting place!

Emmap2 (talk) 23:03, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2021 and 22 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Allison275. Peer reviewers: Emmap2, Luisatolda.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 15:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)