Talk:Women in the Brazilian Congress

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2021 and 22 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Luisatolda. Peer reviewers: Skmpark, Kat975.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:59, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
I found this article interesting and enjoyed how directly it related to our class’s discussions. I believe this article is still a bit undeveloped, but I am excited for you to add content into the sections under Chamber of Deputies, which I believe will help fill out this article. I also would point out that the captions under the images are a bit vague. I would recommend describing what years the images are referring to and what the different colors within them stand for, but I found both really visually appealing. Additionally, it could help to strengthen your article to add citations to each sentence in order to link the facts to valid sources. Grammatically, I found your article concise and easy to read, my only suggestion on this front would be to double check the capitalization of words. You tend to go between capitalizing and not capitalizing “Senate” and “Senator.” I really liked how your introduction wrote out a bit of what the rest of the article would cover, but it did not have the bulk of the article already laid out. I am excited to see the completed article and for everything to be moved out of the Sandbox! Really well done so far! Skmpark (talk) 03:49, 3 December 2021 (UTC)