Talk:Wonder World Tour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?   01:12, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Well, this looks like another excellent article, but I'm sure I can find something to criticise. ;)


 * Quotes need a ref right after them, not just at the end of the sentence/paragraph, for example:
 * "more of a mature show" (in development)


 * "Normally, in a rock show you don’t need someone calling the show. In this one we had to take a more theatrical approach with someone calling cues every step of the way because there was so much going on at once between props and automation" (towards the end of development)
 * It already had it. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Can you find a more original way of ending a quote than "Cyrus said"?
 * Where? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)


 * You don't need to link Los Angeles
 * Can't find it. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Ditto London and, unless qualified, London refers to the city in England
 * Can't find it either. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Don't put quote marks round a blockquote per MOS:QUOTE


 * Punctuation should go after quote marks per MOS:PUNCT (for example, "Breakout." at the start of Concert synopsis)

Since GA doesn't require absolute MoS compliance, I'm happy to pass this, but the above should probably be looked at when you get a chance. Excellent work. :) HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?   01:52, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks :) -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)