Talk:WoodmenLife Tower/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 22:51, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I'll be reviewing this article. I look forward to learning about the topic. APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 22:51, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

Infobox...


 * link "International Style"


 * owner still says Woodmen of the World instead of WoodmenLife, unless you mean that's what the company was called when it was built

Lede...


 * first word is bolded but "The" isn't used elsewhere when mentioning the tower's name


 * "building" and "headquarters" don't need to be linked, but link "LED display"

Description...


 * unlink "headquarters"


 * lowercase f in "Formerly Woodmen..."


 * period after "roof style" and start a new sentence


 * add cubic yards conversion


 * "the building as had" - has not as


 * "As of 2014, the building was 94 percent occupied" - any chance you have an update on this


 * link "U.S. Bank"


 * comma after "Nebraska"


 * link LED

History...


 * comma after 1932


 * side note: such a shame those beautiful buildings were demolished


 * unlink "U.S. Bank"


 * "In November 1967,and the building" - remove "and"


 * remove "th" in "June 6th"


 * "until the construction" - get rid of "the"


 * do you know when Top of the World restaurant closed


 * link "College World Series"


 * can you elaborate a bit about the "valuation and taxation" controversy

Peregrine falcon project...


 * add abbreviate to Nebraska Peregrine Falcon Project so NPFP can used in the next sentence

Reception...


 * unlink Douglas County since it's linked earlier


 * unlink "skyline"

Gallery...


 * link "September 11, 2001 attacks"

External links...


 * add Commons category

Thanks for your work on the article! If you have any questions, let me know. APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 23:40, 7 December 2023 (UTC)


 * @APK That should be everything. The only thing I wasn't able to do was expand on the occupancy, I took a look but couldn't find anything more recent. Also, I couldn't find an exact date for when Top of the World restaurant closed, but the latest I found coverage on it was 2005. Sometime between 2005 and 2010, maybe 2007 (but that would be WP:OR). Thanks for doing this review so quickly, I really appreciate it. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 01:29, 8 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Looks good. Nice job! APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 01:44, 8 December 2023 (UTC)