Talk:Woodpecker from Mars

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I've copyedited to remove some of the glaring spelling errors and grammatical mistakes, but the article still looks as if it was written by a nine-year-old. Could someone who has both a copy of the cartoon and a full grasp of the English language please re-write this? ~dom Kaos~ (talk) 11:21, 9 July 2010 (UTC)