Talk:Woohoo (Christina Aguilera song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk) 01:51, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

===GA pass=== After reviewing the article, I am passing it because it does meet the good article criteria. However, if you find any images for this article, please add them to enhance the article. Other than that, it looks great. Good work. Rp0211 (talk) 02:07, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

This Article is in no way ready to be a GA. I will conduct a new review. (CK)Lakeshade ✽ talk2me


 * I take it that becuase the article is listed as "the second single", when really it was just sent to radio, is the reason why it didn't meet criteria? Becuase to me, the only source in the article stating that this is her second single has expired. The iTunes lik DOES NOT confirm that WooHoo was released as a digital download single at all.--Apeaboutsims (talk) 04:58, 12 August 2010 (UTC)

Additional comment The article would benefit from converting a big chunk of the many quotes into reformulations, to avoid problems with copyright and make sure it's not just a transcript. Additionally, wikilinks in quotations are deprecated by MOS:QUOTE. These two things should be fixed before promotion is considered. Hekerui (talk) 13:06, 20 August 2010 (UTC)

New review by  Aiken   &#9835;   14:58, 30 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Composition:


 * Prose is ok but I feel this section is lacking. Was it Aguilera who wrote it? Music too? What about the musical structure? What key is it in? What instruments are used? How did Aguilera come up with it? And so on.
 * "It has been called a... compared to..." By whom?
 * Nothing is mentioned about Minaj and how she features.


 * Critical reception:


 * "The Daily Star compared the song to Kelis and M.I.A." How could a song be compared to an artist?
 * 'Rob Harvilla of The Village Voice called the song a cool "schoolyard stomp"' - is 'cool' meant to be part of the quote?
 * Chockablocked full of quotes, that don't seem to have any connection or relation to one another.


 * General:


 * Song names should be in double quotes. Publications should be italicized. Make sure they all are.


 * References:


 * Ref #8 needs to be converted to lowercase.


 * Disambiguations:


 * Please see list and fix.


 * Images:


 * None at all? Not even one of Aguilera?

These are my points. I'll also be considering the points left by others before I can consider promoting this. On hold.  Aiken   &#9835;   14:58, 30 August 2010 (UTC)


 * No apparent effort has been made in the past week to improve this, so unfortunately I have no choice but to fail this.  Aiken   Drum   15:55, 6 September 2010 (UTC)