Talk:Woollen Gymnasium/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:29, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * This is really nitpicky, so this is optional, but for stuff like "twenty–six seasons", MOS:HYPHEN would suggest a hyphen, not an endash. MOS:DASH isn't really a GA-thing, so I'm not going to require dash fixes, except for a few special cases involving reference formatting.
 * "fund-raise" is one word usually, with no hyphen
 * Link fencing
 * "elected to build (the Tin Can) in 1923" - Are the paranthesis really necessary?
 * Go ahead and link President Roosevelt, since there were two of them, and non-American readers may not know the chronology enough to know which one is referred to. You can then remove the link to FDR in the next section
 * For the dimensions, can the convert template be added with meters?
 * "The main gym floor will gave room for two varsity basketball courts" - Remove "will"
 * Link limestone
 * "School president Frank Porter Graham" - I'm not sure that School should be capitalized in this usage.
 * "As of the conclusion of the 2019–20, Woollen" - I think you're missing the word season in here.
 * Link Habitat for Humanity

2.
 * Create a further reading section and move Powell there, he's not used as a ref.
 * In the short refs, you have a Wade 1962, but in the long refs, there's a Wade 1961 but not Wade 1962. Which date is correct?

3.
 * In the infobox, you state that is was renovated in 2004 and 2010, but the 2010 renovation isn't mentioned in the article.

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 * Addressed everything but the 2010 renovation. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C ) 03:07, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Added as much info as I could find on the 2010 (actually 2009-12) renovation. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C ) 11:53, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 15:19, 16 May 2020 (UTC)