Talk:Wooloo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 09:23, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Review
Hello! I will be reviewing the article. I am honoured to do so, as I’m kind of a Pokémon fan myself (guess my favourite Pokémon if you want to, but I can confirm it is not Wooloo). So far, the significant problem is the MoS violations.

Prose

 * A mention of Shigeru Ohmori’s reaction to the critical reception of the Pokémon is not present in the prose, despite being in the lead.
 * It should be there, first paragraph of reception, by his last name.
 * Done!

Sources/Citations

 * (Optional) Try adding secondary sources, but I’ll leave them be if such sources are not available. I helped you with one of them.
 * The only concern, the overuse of FN 7 (primary source). It’s used four times on this page.
 * Should be fixed now. Fixed an oversight with a few missing accessdate.
 * Done.

Copy-vios

 * Nothing special from Earwig, but I’ll let that 26.5% be.

Images
Everything should be addressed!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 10:06, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
 * So far, so good!
 * (Optional) If you can, try adding more Wooloo pics.
 * I fear given the size of the article adding more than one might get called out for fair use rationale if I add another.
 * That’s why it’s optional
 * Very well then, I will pass it.  Brachy 08  (Talk) 10:10, 10 August 2023 (UTC)