Talk:Work (Ciara song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 02:00, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: One found and fixed. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:05, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Linkrot: None found. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:06, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Originally, Fantasy Ride was announced to be divided into three different discs, each representing a particular sound. Ungrammatical, rewrite in good plain English.
 * The song and "High Price" were at one point in contention of serving as the album's lead single Ungrammatical.
 * The song's hook consists of repeated shouty remarks to "Work! Work!" "shouty"?
 * Overuse of "The song" as the start of sentences.
 * Sarah Rodman of The Boston Globe named the song the album's most essential and praised Elliott as the best guest artist "most essential"
 * ' ' Andy Kellman of Allmusic was negative on the song,'' rewrite in good plain English.
 * On the issue dated July 11, 2009, "Work" entered the UK Singles Chart at number 71. "On"?
 *  In its third week, it rose four placements to acquire a peak of number 52 "placements"?
 * ' ' Ciara then signals her dancers to a sand dune in front of the site, for a group choreography, all wearing white tops, torn blue jeans,'' ????
 * This is not reasonably good prose, please find someone who can write good plain English to copy-edit throughout.
 * Complies sufficiently with MoS
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Adequately sourced, RS, no evidence of OR
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Reasonable coverage for a minor hit.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * NPOV
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Images captioned and FUR provided. Audio clip is <10% and FUR provided.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for a thorough copy-edit. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:34, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I guess this passes muster now. Listing as GA. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:02, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I guess this passes muster now. Listing as GA. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:02, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

I have put a request at WP:GOCE. Pancake (talk) 13:43, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The article has been copy edited. Pancake (talk) 14:21, 7 December 2011 (UTC)